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@@ -118,14 +118,13 @@ theories~\cite{kambe_odd-parity_2018, haule_arrested_2009,
 rau_hidden_2012, riggs_evidence_2015, hoshino_resolution_2013,
 ikeda_theory_1998, chandra_hastatic_2013, harrison_hidden_nodate,
 ikeda_emergent_2012} propose associating any of a variety of broken symmetries
-with \ho. This work analyzes a phenomenological model of order parameters of
-general symmetry, linearly coupled to strain. We identify yet another mechanism
-that is best compatible with two experimental observations: first, the $\Bog$
-``nematic" elastic susceptibility $(C_{11}-C_{12})/2$ softens anomalously from
-room temperature down to
-$T_{\text{\ho}}=17.5\,\K$;\cite{de_visser_thermal_1986} and second, a $\Bog$
-nematic distortion is observed by x-ray scattering under sufficient pressure to
-destroy the \ho\ state.\cite{choi_pressure-induced_2018}
+with \ho. This work analyzes a phenomenological model with order parameters of
+general symmetry, linearly coupled to strain. Of these, only one is compatible
+with two experimental observations: first, the $\Bog$ ``nematic" elastic
+susceptibility $(C_{11}-C_{12})/2$ softens anomalously from room temperature
+down to $T_{\text{\ho}}=17.5\,\K$;\cite{de_visser_thermal_1986} and second, a
+$\Bog$ nematic distortion is observed by x-ray scattering under sufficient
+pressure to destroy the \ho\ state.\cite{choi_pressure-induced_2018}
 
 Recent resonant ultrasound spectroscopy (\rus) measurements were used to
 examine the thermodynamic discontinuities in the elastic moduli at