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 \opening{To the editors of Physical Review,}
 
-We wish to appeal your decision on our manuscript LZ16835, \emph{Complex
-complex landscapes}, which received a single referee report.
+We wish to appeal your decision on our manuscript \emph{Complex complex
+landscapes}, which received a single referee report.
 
+We believe that the referee's overall criticisms of our paper are not entirely
+justified (and above all, difficult to answer).  We have, however, submitted a
+revised manuscript clarifying the specific aspects that the referee found trying.
 
-We believe that the criticisms that the referee addresses to our paper are
-not entirely justified (and above all, difficult to answer).  We have, however,
-clarified as much as possible the parts that the referee found trying.
-
-The referee is particularly worried that we have cited articles that are not
-themselves sufficiently cited, so we thought that it may be useful at this
-point to propose a set of referees that are beyond suspicion of incompetence or
-uncitedness:
+The referee seems particularly worried that we have cited articles that are not
+themselves sufficiently cited, so we thought it may be useful propose a set of
+referees that are beyond suspicion of incompetence or uncitedness:
 
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   G Ben Arous  & Courant \\